Man, each week you just seem to get better and better.
The flow and movement of the first piece is great. Not to mention I get a kick out of the lines which seem to come out of the nostrils. Emphasis, value, and movement are present and I wouldn't change anything about the piece. Great job!
The second one is also interesting! The expressive lines and patterning are great, but are borderline messy scribbles. Thankfully you made sure to take not to your line making and didn't let it disslove into an utter mess of lines. (Or at least I'm assuming so...) The patch of green is just enough color for the piece. (and works great with the background with your blog too har har har [that was a bad joke on my part]) The only thing I'm a bit iffy about is if you should add more words. I can see italion stalion but... the words kind of stand out because they're the only words I can find. Almost like an artist signature on a piece. It could be okay due to all the pen lines. Or, maybe, you might want to add more. Just a suggestion because I'm not sure if adding more will make or break the piece. D:
Like Ashley said, the flow in the first piece is great. Your pictures all are unique in composition the the second one shows distinctly different line quality, but they all look to be very much your own. Thats a super cool quality in a concentration I'd say. I think the first piece strikes me the most, although it seems there isnt a definite focus the work is not muddled at all. It's very clear and very flowing with interesting sort of blockades made by the more faded lines coming from the face. Overall I'd say this piece is one of my favorite of yours. Jordan, from an outsiders opinion, the most fantastic part of your work is your ability to see and translate that into art. I can't really explain that bettersorry.
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Man, each week you just seem to get better and better.
The flow and movement of the first piece is great. Not to mention I get a kick out of the lines which seem to come out of the nostrils. Emphasis, value, and movement are present and I wouldn't change anything about the piece. Great job!
The second one is also interesting! The expressive lines and patterning are great, but are borderline messy scribbles. Thankfully you made sure to take not to your line making and didn't let it disslove into an utter mess of lines. (Or at least I'm assuming so...) The patch of green is just enough color for the piece. (and works great with the background with your blog too har har har [that was a bad joke on my part]) The only thing I'm a bit iffy about is if you should add more words. I can see italion stalion but... the words kind of stand out because they're the only words I can find. Almost like an artist signature on a piece. It could be okay due to all the pen lines. Or, maybe, you might want to add more. Just a suggestion because I'm not sure if adding more will make or break the piece.
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Like Ashley said, the flow in the first piece is great. Your pictures all are unique in composition the the second one shows distinctly different line quality, but they all look to be very much your own. Thats a super cool quality in a concentration I'd say. I think the first piece strikes me the most, although it seems there isnt a definite focus the work is not muddled at all. It's very clear and very flowing with interesting sort of blockades made by the more faded lines coming from the face. Overall I'd say this piece is one of my favorite of yours. Jordan, from an outsiders opinion, the most fantastic part of your work is your ability to see and translate that into art. I can't really explain that bettersorry.
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